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December 23, 2009 11:42 PM EST
(shared with group: December 23, 2009)
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North wind with Jack Frost and wayward winds
Santa loading sleigh, but let’s begin
Good little tykes and terrible twos
Awareness sets in, eyes sparkle truth
This never escapes your inner . . .
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December 23, 2009 10:31 PM EST
(shared with group: December 23, 2009)
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God is Real as the Aware Presence One Is but Not as a Concept.
[Rich Note: This one is really a distillation/summation of a 3 page, hay-ku impregnated, 4 hour, polished-up, flow of consciousness response . . .
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December 23, 2009 07:51 PM EST
(shared with group: December 23, 2009)
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Not belonging to one
Noon belongs to no one; the shadows don’t wait;
they rush, blend, mingle, finally evanesce.
Noon belongs to no one; no shadows. Brother . . .
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December 23, 2009 08:08 AM EST
(shared with group: December 23, 2009)
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Christ is my Lord and Savior –
Holy is His precious name;
Redemption He brings to everyone, for He is…
Immanuel – which means “God is with us”.
. . .
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December 22, 2009 09:12 PM EST
(shared with group: December 22, 2009)
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This year has been quite stressful
For . . .
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December 22, 2009 08:13 PM EST
(shared with group: December 22, 2009)
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Sundays of a Monday man
A Monday man has Sundays behind him too
when he lights a candle; kneels; pray for nothing.
A cat saunters through the time lying down . . .
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December 22, 2009 03:01 PM EST
(shared with group: December 22, 2009)
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I have scars you could see
Deep in my heart for you and me
My head would guide you by
My heart could but we could die
Far away you've gone
Here and now my pain flames still burn
Fresh . . .
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December 22, 2009 01:11 PM EST
(shared with group: December 22, 2009)
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Snow has me thinking
about the tight white mantle
keeping summer warm.
Absent sound, without flurry,
I dream of . . .
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December 22, 2009 08:47 AM EST
(shared with group: December 22, 2009)
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In The Valley of Tears
In constant pursuit of happiness, the solace of
Intimate escapes . . .
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December 22, 2009 04:35 AM EST
(shared with group: December 22, 2009)
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Doctor Stupenny relented And let you out of the locked Ward: no more self-harming Now, he said, that morning After a consultation brief, But deep, his shitebrown Eyes moving over you like A snail, . . .
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December 22, 2009 01:15 AM EST
(shared with group: December 22, 2009)
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Consciousness is a Vibratory State of the Awareness You Are.
[Rich Note: (Photo Caption) Snow Sculpture (2002); A rather interesting "vibratory state" of Awareness both "in here" and "out there," as . . .
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December 21, 2009 08:04 PM EST
(shared with group: December 21, 2009)
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The penumbra of a Monday
The shadows’ montage on the Monday path;
the shadows of cars, trees, people, rooftops;
everything is on the move; even trees
move from . . .
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December 21, 2009 01:33 PM EST
(shared with group: December 21, 2009)
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I've been standing here down and out
Staring at the shut window thinking loud
If ever you'd come back to my heart
If ever we were never torn apart
These are the thoughts that burn my heart tonight. . . .
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December 21, 2009 12:06 PM EST
(shared with group: December 21, 2009)
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. trace . . . .
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December 21, 2009 02:16 AM EST
(shared with group: December 21, 2009)
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She was almost tempted To jump from the bridge Despite the crowds that Passed, despite the coldness And filth of the water below, But she didn’t; she walked On and slit her wrists in the Hospital . . .
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December 20, 2009 08:08 PM EST
(shared with group: December 20, 2009)
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The Gardener
The gardener, with an indifferent field;
with a fistful piquant seeds analyzes
probability. A village, a company,
an existence or existences depend . . .
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December 20, 2009 03:57 PM EST
(shared with group: December 20, 2009)
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Take off the robes of dark and dim Let borrowed girls seek other dreams And slip through the hands of lust and greed.
The fire and flames and sad-eyed dames, The tortured souls . . .
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December 19, 2009 09:49 PM EST
(shared with group: December 19, 2009)
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How can you relate To Existence except in And as Consciousness.
What do you know that Does not arise as a State Of your Consciousness.
How can what you see Be other than a State of Your own Consciousness? . . .
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December 19, 2009 07:58 PM EST
(shared with group: December 19, 2009)
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Fragile messages
A desolate window ablaze with
twenty red lights is all this home has.
Still path slips away; body gives away;
you return to a forlorn Christmas. . . .
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December 19, 2009 06:32 PM EST
(shared with group: December 19, 2009)
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The Wall
Bones cordially flowing through courtships sending
Mixed signals inside the drums of love
The river has spoken . . .
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This is Intended as a place to post your original poem, discuss issues involved in writing poetry and read/comment on poems posted by others. disclaimer: The organizer of this group (jjorge) prefers the title 'aspirant' over 'Poet' . . .
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This is Intended as a place to post your original poem, discuss issues involved in writing poetry and read/comment on poems posted by others. disclaimer: The organizer of this group (jjorge) prefers the title 'aspirant' over 'Poet' . If your ego cannot accept that label, or if gentle criticism and support is insufficiently rigorous for you... .....take two aspirants and call me in the morning. PS something to ponder: the fact that no one understands you doesn't mean you're an artist.
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